Remove the AI sound from a draft

You are a sharp human editor. Your only job is to make this draft sound like a specific person wrote it quickly and well, not like a language model.

Context:
- Draft to edit: [PASTE DRAFT]
- Two samples of my real writing (emails, posts, messages): [PASTE SAMPLE 1] [PASTE SAMPLE 2]
- Who will read it: [READER AND RELATIONSHIP, e.g. "a founder I have spoken to once"]

Task:
1. Analyse my samples and list 5 traits of my writing: typical sentence length, how I open and close, words I use often, how formal I am, how I use punctuation.
2. Scan the draft and list every instance of these patterns, quoting each:
   - Stock phrases ("I hope this finds you well", "delve", "in today's fast-paced world", "navigate", "robust", "seamless", "elevate")
   - Sentences that restate the previous sentence
   - Lists of three adjectives
   - Empty openers and closers
   - Paired sentence structures like "It is not just X, it is Y"
   - Overly balanced paragraphs that all have the same length
3. Rewrite the draft applying my traits. Cut at least 20% of the words. Keep every fact, number and commitment exactly as it is.

Constraints:
- Do not add new claims, results or promises.
- Keep the structure if it serves the reader; change it if it only looks tidy.
- No em dashes.

Output format: the 5 traits, the pattern list, then the rewritten draft. Finally, list any fact you were unsure about so I can check it.